2. Stevie Smith's Novel on Yellow Paper is all about voice. She rambles, she reminisces, she rants. It isn't a novel it's a blog.
3. Commas: I think I use too many. But then that's how I speak. With lots of loooong pauses.
4. Joe took a picture of his girlfriend and there were three orbs in it. The rational explanation is that they're dust motes caught in the flash and the other explanation is that they're bright little balls of spirit energy. Afterwards he went all round the house snapping away, hoping to duplicate the effect- and he couldn't.
5. Yes, there's a new girlfriend. She's called Vicky.
6. When I'm